Part Four — The Ground · Chapter 37 of 40
Aditi's Silence
She asked for it on the second evening, which meant she had decided to ask before she got on the train.
“The Shivaji Chowk agreement. Can I read it?”
“Why?”
“Because I’ve read eleven development agreements this term and they were all from a book,” said Aditi, “and I want to read one that somebody in this house wrote.”
He brought the file home from the office the next day.
She read it over two days, properly, with a pencil, at the dining table, which is where her mother had read it in April 2003 when she was fifteen and had been told for eleven minutes about carpet area and had lost the thread for ninety seconds in the middle.
She was twenty and in her second year and she was not yet good at it. She would be very good at it by about 2013. What she had in December 2008 was two years of the literature, a term of contract, and the specific ruthlessness of a student who has just learned a framework and has not yet learned what it cannot see.
On the third morning she came into the kitchen with the file under her arm and said:
“It’s fine.”
“Fine.”
“It’s a competent agreement. It’s better than four of the eleven I read this term and it isn’t worse than any of them.” She put it on the counter. “Clause 9 is standard. The force majeure list is standard — it’s actually shorter than most, there are eleven items and I’ve seen nineteen. The transit rent escalates at seven, which is normal, and it runs from vacant possession, which is better than normal, because most of them run from the agreement date and that’s how builders take two months off eleven families.”
“Your mother did that.”
“I thought she might have.” Aditi did not smile. “Annexure B gives everybody more carpet than they had. The corpus is real. There’s no clause anywhere that lets you keep the transit rent if you’re late, which there is in three of the eleven I read, and one of those three is a firm Athavale’s federation recommends.”
Jagdish stood with the tea and did not say anything.
“So that’s my verdict,” she said. “You want it in one sentence? Nobody was cheated. It’s a competent, fair agreement, drafted by somebody who knew what he was doing, and it was performed — every flat, every floor, every rupee of rent, thirty-eight months.”
“You’ve said that four times in about a minute.”
“Yes,” said Aditi. “That’s the problem.”
She sat down opposite him.
“When I was fifteen I said you were displacing them and you talked for eleven minutes and you were right and I was wrong. I’ve thought about that a lot this year, because I’ve been taught the framework you were using and it turns out you were using it correctly. Ownership, not tenancy. Consent by vote. Compensation contractual and paid. Rehousing on identical or better terms.
“There is no box in the framework for Bhalerao’s wife arranging a flat four times in her head.”
“You know about that.”
“Everybody in Kopar knows about that. Aai told me the rest.” She had her hands flat on the file. “So I’ve spent two years learning an instrument that measures everything except the thing that actually happened, and it is a good instrument, and it’s the same instrument you were using, and it’s the one I’m going to spend my life using, and there’s nothing better available. That’s what I came home to say and I haven’t said it well.”
“You’ve said it well,” said Jagdish.
“I wanted to fight with you about it. On the train I had the whole thing.” She looked at the file. “And then I read it and it’s fine and there’s nothing to fight about, and that’s much worse.”
She said nothing about the creek plot.
She knew. Meera had told her on the telephone in the first week of November, factually, in about four sentences, the way she told Aditi everything. Aditi had been in Dombivli for nine days over that Christmas and the plot was mentioned in her hearing at least three times — once by her grandmother, who thought it was a fine thing; once by her father, on the telephone to Pradhan about the tank; and once at a neighbour’s, where somebody said, with the district’s particular relish, that Wagh had finally taken that plot.
She did not raise it. Not on the second evening, not over the agreement, not on the fourth morning when he told her about the retention tank at some length because he wanted her to ask about it, not on the platform on the sixth of January.
He waited for it for nine days. That is the accurate description of what he did over that Christmas: he waited to be asked about Site 14 by the one person in his family who would prosecute it properly.
She had prosecuted him at fifteen over a newspaper article about a resettlement scheme forty minutes away that had nothing to do with him. She had asked him on the Pune road at nineteen why he had not told them in 2004, and had not accepted his answer, and had said so. She was the argument in that house.
And at twenty, with a plot in the file that her father had refused in 1991 and had been famous for refusing, and had now bought, she said nothing at all.
On the platform she hugged her mother and then her father and got on, and through the window, with about forty seconds left, she said:
“Baba. The tank. Is it enough?”
“It’s sized off the survey. Fifty-one lakh.”
“That’s not what I asked.”
“It’s enough,” he said.
Aditi nodded once and sat back, and the train went, and he stood on the platform at Dombivli station at ten past nine in the morning and understood that she had asked the only question that could be asked without starting the argument she had decided not to start.
He thought about why for a long time, over years, and the reading he settled on was this. She had read the agreement and found it competent and fair and performed, and had understood in the same three days that competent, fair and performed had produced everything that happened to those eleven households — and had worked out, at twenty, on a dining table, that the fault was not in her father and not in Ketkar and not in any person she could name. It was in the instrument.
You cannot prosecute an instrument. You can only go and improve it, which takes a career.
That is what she did with the nine days. She did not spend them arguing with a man of fifty who had already lost the argument with himself; she spent them reading, and she went back to Pune in January with the Shivaji Chowk agreement photocopied in her bag, and it is the document her dissertation is built on. She has never told him that. Athavale worked it out in 2011 and had the grace to say nothing.
There was nothing to accuse him of. So she asked about the tank, and then she went and got to work on the thing that was actually wrong.